Incident – 1st January 1867 – The Nuns Take Prisoners

Steel wheels screeched against iron rails as the locomotive sliced through the hazy dawn. Steam plumed from its chimney, a leviathan of industry snaking towards Fort Brashear. Inside, passengers settled into the rhythm of the journey, their chatter and laughter mingling with the clatter of the train.

A man in a pinstripe suit, Emerson Crane by name, flicked through a newspaper, his eyes skimming over tales of far-off lands. Across from him, a woman with raven hair and eyes sharp as flint, Eliza Thorn, cradled a book in her lap but watched the other passengers over the top edge. Young couples whispered sweet nothings, and a preacher murmured passages to an elderly lady clinging to her rosary.

The tranquility shattered when masked men burst from between the carriages, guns brandished with grim determination. Their leader, a towering figure known as Flynn Richert, stood at the forefront with a revolver in each hand.

“Nobody move!” Flynn Richert’s voice boomed through the carriage. “This here’s a robbery!”

His gang spread out like shadows at dusk, their movements precise and fluid—a choreography of menace. One by one, they relieved passengers of jewelry and coin purses.

“Please,” Emerson pleaded as a grizzled bandit loomed over him, “I need that to feed my family.”

The bandit sneered and yanked away Emerson’s wallet. “Family’s gotta eat too,” he retorted before turning his attention to Eliza.

“Hand it over, missy,” he growled. Eliza met his gaze, handed over her worldly possessions.

With an amused grunt, the bandit moved on.

In the chaos, a young boy whimpered beside his mother who whispered courage into his ear. The gang ignored their silent bravery; they sought tangible wealth.

Flynn Richert paced the aisle like a king surveying his domain. His eyes darted from face to face, searching for deceit or heroism. Finding neither to his dissatisfaction, he holstered one revolver and scooped up valuables with his free hand.

One of his men stumbled upon a hidden compartment beneath a seat—inside was a velvet pouch heavy with coins.

“Well lookie here!” he exclaimed triumphantly.

The air grew thick with tension and fear mingled with the metallic scent of gunpowder from pistols not yet fired but eager to speak.

Flynn Richert turned on his heel to address his captive audience once more. “We thank y’all for your generous donations,” he drawled with false civility.

He tipped an imaginary hat then signaled his gang to retreat. They backed away slowly towards the rear of the train.

High atop a hill that rolled like a slumbering beast under the first blush of dawn, Abbess Eleanor sat astride her steed, a silhouette etched against the waking sky. Matilda O’Hara, cloaked in the somber hues of her order, perched on her own mount beside her mentor. The two women surveyed the train below with eyes sharp as the blades they carried.

Behind them, a cadre of warrior nuns waited in disciplined silence, each one a coiled spring of holy fervor and martial prowess. The nuns’ horses shifted restlessly, sensing the impending surge of action. From their elevated vantage, the nuns observed the robbers spill from the train like a swarm of locusts descending upon the land. The outlaws regrouped on the fringes of the forest, their hurried movements betraying a sense of urgency. Their escape into the woods was no random choice; it was a calculated move, a path they knew well, etched into their minds like the back of their scarred hands.

Abbess Eleanor’s gaze never wavered as she watched them disappear into the embrace of the trees. Her eyes were like those of an eagle, missing nothing. She knew those woods as if they were her own cloistered corridors—every hidden thicket and secret passageway that meandered through its depths.

Beside her, Tilly sat motionless, a silent sentinel. Her eyes followed the outlaws with a mix of curiosity and concern. The Abbey had trained her for moments such as this, yet her heart raced with an unfamiliar blend of anticipation and fear.

The nuns behind them remained statuesque, their discipline unwavering despite the excitement that thrummed through their ranks. They were warriors of faith, sworn to protect and serve under Eleanor’s stern guidance.

Abbess Eleanor’s hand lifted slightly; the motion was subtle but unmistakable. Tilly’s breath caught as she recognized the signal for what it was—an unspoken command that set their righteous purpose into motion.

In a hushed onslaught, the nuns descended the slope. Their habits fluttered in the wind like dark wings of vengeance. Hooves pounded the earth, each beat a solemn drum heralding judgment.

Trees loomed like ancient sentinels as the nuns charged into the woods, their horses adept at navigating the uneven terrain. Sunlight pierced the canopy in thin shafts, casting an otherworldly glow on the chase. The robbers, sensing pursuit, spurred their mounts desperately, branches snapping under the thunderous advance.

Flynn Richert led the flight, his heart pounding with the rhythm of a cornered animal. Behind him rode his three compatriots—Bryce, a wiry man with eyes like flint; Harlan, whose hulking frame belied his nimble reflexes; and Cole, youngest of the bunch, with a reckless streak that often landed him in trouble.

The forest swallowed sounds and muffled cries as hooves churned up soil and foliage. Nuns closed in on the bandits from all sides, silent as shadows yet as formidable as the walls of their Abbey. Each sister’s face was set in determination, their hands steady on reins and weapons alike.

Bryce glanced over his shoulder and saw the black habits bearing down on them. He yanked his horse to the left, attempting to evade capture. But Sister Agnes anticipated his move; she had studied the ways of the wood and knew its secrets well. She maneuvered her horse alongside Bryce’s and, with precision born of countless hours of training, dismounted mid-stride.

Landing on the forest floor with barely a sound, Sister Agnes engaged Bryce in hand-to-hand combat. His knife slashed through the air but met only emptiness as she deftly sidestepped his desperate swings. Within moments, she had him immobilized—his arms locked behind him and his face pressed into the mossy earth.

Harlan charged towards Sister Beatrice with a roar, his bulk a weapon in itself. Yet for all his size and strength, he was no match for her speed. She slipped beneath his guard like water flowing around a stone. Her hands were quick and precise, targeting pressure points that sapped Harlan’s strength and left him gasping for breath.

Cole, wild-eyed with fear and adrenaline, fired his pistol into the brush where Sister Clara emerged like an avenging ghost. The bullet whizzed past her ear; she did not flinch. Instead, she closed the distance between them with agile steps taught by years of disciplined practice. A swift strike to Cole’s wrist sent the gun flying from his grasp before he too found himself bound and subdued under her unyielding grip.

Flynn Richert had witnessed it all—the systematic dismantling of his crew by these black-clad specters of vengeance—and realized that flight was futile. He reined in his horse and raised his hands in surrender as Abbess Eleanor approached him from across a clearing.

“Your transgressions have not gone unnoticed,” Abbess Eleanor proclaimed as she dismounted with an air of authority that even nature itself seemed to respect.

The captured men were forced to their knees before her—tied up by skilled hands that wove rope like scripture onto skin—and made to face their reckoning.

“Sinners in the hands of an angry God,” Abbess Eleanor intoned as she surveyed her quarry with eyes that promised no absolution. Finn Richert met her gaze defiantly but saw within those depths a resolve against which no villainy could stand.

Finn Richert’s lips parted, the ghost of a swagger still clinging to his voice. “Sister’s, let’s be reasonable here. I’m sure we can—”

“Silence,” Abbess Eleanor commanded, her voice slicing through his words like a blade through parchment. “Your tongue has danced its last deceit.”

He fell mute, his usual charm and cunning faltering under her steely gaze. Around them, the forest seemed to hold its breath, the very leaves whispering of judgment.

“Sister Margaret,” Abbess Eleanor beckoned without turning her head.

A nun stepped forward, her movements fluid and purposeful. She retrieved a thick, leather-bound ledger from the saddlebag of her horse and presented it to the Abbess with both hands, bowing her head in reverence.

Abbess Eleanor received the tome with a solemn nod and opened it carefully, her fingers tracing the lines of script as if communing with the text itself. The pages rustled softly, a sound that seemed unnaturally loud in the stillness of the woods.

“Let us recount your sins,” she began, her voice echoing with the gravity of divine providence.

“Flynn Richert,” she read aloud, “charged with arson that reduced an orphanage to ash. Seven souls perished in flames that you set for mere coin.”

Flynn’s jaw tightened, his eyes darting away for an instant before regaining their defiant glint.

“Bryce Kellerman,” she continued, turning to face the man bound at her feet. “Accused of defiling sacred ground—desecrating graves in search of trinkets and baubles buried with the dead.”

Bryce squirmed under her gaze, his earlier bravado extinguished like a snuffed candle.

“Harlan Burch,” she said with a tone that bore the weight of mountains. “Guilty of unspeakable cruelty towards animals. Tortured for sport, their cries echoed through valleys and reached the ears of the just.”

Harlan’s mouth opened but no words came out; shame or fear had stolen his voice.

“And Cole Maddox,” Abbess Eleanor’s eyes locked onto the youngest bandit. “You stand accused of theft from those most vulnerable—the sick and elderly robbed of their means to survive.”

Cole’s head bowed low; even he could not meet her gaze now.

Each crime laid bare was more heinous than the last; each word spoken by Abbess Eleanor etched into the air like a decree carved in stone. The men were left exposed—stripped of their bravado and confronted by their own vile actions.

Flynn Richert attempted once more to wield his silver tongue. “Abbess,” he implored, “everyone deserves a chance at redemption.”

“Redemption?” Abbess Eleanor closed the ledger with a sound that resonated like a tomb sealing shut. “Redemption is earned through penance and contrition—not bartered like common goods.”

The forest hushed to a silence, punctuated only by the occasional caw of a distant crow. Abbess Eleanor towered over the subdued men, her posture rigid with righteous indignation. The nuns formed a tight circle around them, an unbroken chain of judgment.

“I am a woman of God,” Abbess Eleanor’s voice cut through the silence, “but I do not shun the advancements of science. For it is through knowledge we discern the workings of the divine.”

Flynn Richert and his men exchanged wary glances, the terror in their eyes betraying their hardened exteriors.

“The Lord works in mysterious ways,” she continued, “and it is my sacred duty to unravel those mysteries.” Her hand caressed the cover of her ledger as if drawing strength from its contents. “I believe the devil finds refuge in the minds of men like you—nurturing sin, fanning the flames of evil deeds.”

“Fortunately,” Abbess Eleanor’s lips twisted into a semblance of a smile that never reached her cold eyes, “I am versed in both scripture and medicine. I have dedicated my life to purging Satan’s influence from the souls and minds he has corrupted.”

“With God as my witness,” she proclaimed, “I have developed methods to extract the devil from within. Your arrival is providential; you will contribute to this holy endeavor.” She stood before the bound criminals, her eyes reflecting the depth of her conviction. “Gentlemen,” she began, her voice resonating with an almost maternal warmth that seemed at odds with their grim surroundings, “you luckily find yourselves on the precipice of salvation.”

Flynn Richert and his men shifted uncomfortably on the cold ground, their imaginations conjuring unspeakable horrors in the abyss of their ignorance. “You speak of salvation, but these chains…” Flynn’s voice trailed off as he rattled his restraints pointedly.

“Ah,” Abbess Eleanor nodded sagely, “but it is through confinement that we find freedom. The place you will soon inhabit is a place of healing and redemption. Imagine it not as a prison, but as a crucible within which your souls will be purified.”

She paced slowly before them, her habit whispering against the stone floor. “Within hallowed walls, we have chambers designed to soothe the troubled mind. Rooms filled with light and air where silence reigns supreme—a balm for your inner turmoil.” Abbess Eleanor continued. “Here, we employ treatments at the forefront of medical science—therapies to restore balance to your thoughts and clarity to your spirits.” She spoke as one might describe an exclusive retreat reserved for the privileged few.

“Rest assured,” she said with an enigmatic smile, “these practices are not for public display or scrutiny. Our hospital’s existence is known only to a select few within the Church. Its doors would open for none but His Holiness himself.”

Her gaze swept over them like an eagle surveying its domain. “It is there you will embark on your journey towards atonement. You will labor, pray, and meditate upon your sins until such time as you are deemed redeemed.”

The men’s unease grew palpable as they considered her words—a blend of promise and threat that left them uncertain of their fate. Abbess Eleanor stopped before Flynn once more, her presence commanding yet strangely comforting in the sepulchral gloom. “You may consider yourselves fortunate,” she murmured, her tone almost conspiratorial. “Few are given this opportunity to cleanse their souls so thoroughly.”

Flynn Richert met her eyes, searching for some hint of mercy or deception. He found neither—only an unwavering belief in the path she had laid out for them.

“And once redeemed?” he asked tentatively.

“Redemption,” Abbess Eleanor replied with solemnity, “is not merely an escape from punishment but a rebirth into God’s grace. Once you have achieved this state through penance and prayer—once you have truly repented—you shall be free to walk among men once more.”

She turned away from them then, leaving them to ponder her words amidst whispers of hope and fear. Behind her, nuns stood sentinel—a silent testament to the discipline and devotion that ruled this place.

“Through my hands,” she intoned with messianic fervor, “you will face divine intervention.” Cole Maddox whimpered, his youthful face contorted in fear as he struggled against his bonds. “Science and faith,” Abbess Eleanor continued, seemingly oblivious to their terror, “are interwoven in our quest. What others call mania is but dedication to a cause greater than oneself.”

Harlan Burch let out a guttural cry that echoed through the woods—a plea for mercy or perhaps an acknowledgment of his impending fate.

“The devil has nested within your minds,” Abbess Eleanor said with finality. “It is time we excised him.”

With that declaration hanging heavy in the air like a funeral shroud, she signaled to Sister Margaret who nodded with grave understanding.

The nuns moved with purposeful grace—each step deliberate and unwavering as they prepared to escort their captives back to the Abbey Of Whispering Shadows. Flynn Richert’s eyes met Abbess Eleanor’s one last time—a silent battle of wills—but it was clear whose conviction was unbreakable.

She turned to Sister Margaret once again. “Take them to the Abbey. They will face justice under our care.”

The nuns moved in unison, hoisting each captive onto horseback as if they were but sacks of grain. Their efficiency was both terrifying and awe-inspiring—a testament to their unwavering commitment to order and discipline.

Abbess Eleanor turned to survey her sisters, pride evident even within her stern countenance. “Bless you sisters,” she instructed calmly. “God and all the saints have smiled upon us this day.”

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